[color:b16e=blue][b]on a cold, foggy winter evening in December, I was walking in a dark, creepy forest where the trees looked dead and the animals almost not alive. It was silent, not even the crows dared to make a sound in the presence of this almighty stiffness that filled the air.[/b][/color] ([color:b16e=red]introductory paragraph, in which you describe the weather, the place and what the main character is doing)[/color]
[color:b16e=blue][b]I really liked this cold weather because of the silence. But suddenly, this divine silence was disturbed by a distant shriek coming from far away. I was shocked at first, then I realized that somebody was in danger. I ran as fast as I could towards the sound which became louder and clearer as I became nearer. When I reached its source I was struck by terror, a little girl was being attacked by a fierce wolf. At first, I didn't know what to do, but there was no time for thinking, so i picked up the biggest stone on the ground, lifted it high enough, and threw it at the wolf. Blood started oozing from the wolf's head, and the girl's shrieks of terror turned into cries. The wolf was dead and the girl was safe.[/b][/color] ([color:b16e=red]development paragraph, in which you tell the event that the whole story is based on: what happened, who was in danger and because of what, how did the story's hero save him\her)[/color]
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It was really cold, so I wrapped the girl with my coat, then I called for an ambulance, It came fast and took her into a nearby hospital. I went home that evening still unable to realize what I've done in the forest, I saved a little girl's life from the claws.[/b][/color] [color:b16e=red](conclusion paragraph, in which you tell what happened after the rescue, and how you felt about it)[/color]
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